I hate revisions, too, because I find I'm always second-guessing myself. And often, I do cut out things that make people say, "shouldn't there be more information on such-and-such?" Yeah. Cut it out because *other* people said...
I agree with the Wicked Nurse of the West up there ;-). When I started reading The Skewed Throne, I'll admit, I had some, "What's going on here?" moments. But I continued, because I was confident that you eventually would tell me, which you did. If you start going into long descriptions about how this and such a culture evolved to such-and-so, well, it wouldn't be *you*.
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Date: 2009-07-08 09:44 pm (UTC)I agree with the Wicked Nurse of the West up there ;-). When I started reading The Skewed Throne, I'll admit, I had some, "What's going on here?" moments. But I continued, because I was confident that you eventually would tell me, which you did. If you start going into long descriptions about how this and such a culture evolved to such-and-so, well, it wouldn't be *you*.