yes, exactly. because of the opening, the reader starts shifting into gear with certain expectations. I call it the 'portentious prologue' - then, bam! You've undermined them.
Busy weekend. Haven't had a chance to look at it yet beyond that, though. Never fear. I will.
Re: Gak!!!
Busy weekend. Haven't had a chance to look at it yet beyond that, though. Never fear. I will.
(goes away cackling madly)