ext_13445 ([identity profile] kateelliott.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jpskewedthrone 2005-08-08 07:55 pm (UTC)

Re: Gak!!!

yes, exactly. because of the opening, the reader starts shifting into gear with certain expectations. I call it the 'portentious prologue' - then, bam! You've undermined them.

Busy weekend. Haven't had a chance to look at it yet beyond that, though. Never fear. I will.

(goes away cackling madly)

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