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Joshua Palmatier ([personal profile] jpskewedthrone) wrote2008-05-28 05:13 pm

Writing update

Managed to finish another chapter today on Well of Sorrows, so figured I'd do an update on the writing. The chapter went more or less as expected and I should only have 3 more chapters until the end of the novel. I'm certainly tying things up and did the big reveals in this chapter. So everything is on the table and now I just need to wrap up all of the action. A few pieces aren't clear to me yet, on exactly how they'll play out, but I had something occur to me today for two of the characters that was a revelation, but would be much more powerful than what I'd had planned before this for them. Mostly I know what I WANT to have happen, but I'm not clear on exactly HOW it happens.

Tomorrow, I get to hurt my main character more than he's ever been hurt before in this book. *grin* And the cool thing . . . he does it to himself, knowingly. Basically, everything has gone as far into hell as it can, and so from here on out it's everyone trying to fix the problem in whatever way they can.

OK, if you missed the radio interview that WSKG did with me yesterady, you can listen to it here. The streaming audio link is on the top right. Check it out and let me know how stupid I sound. *grin* I caught a little bit of it on the radio when it was rebroadcast but couldn't listen to it for too long before hearing my own voice (without the benefit of being drunk at the time) weirded me out and I turned it off. I don't think I screwed up in too many spots, but there were a few instance where the word I wanted to say just wouldn't come to me and so I had to go with something . . . lame instead. This is why I write and don't do improv. You can go back and delete the lame crap you wrote earlier and replace it with something better . . . AND NO ONE KNOWS.

In any case, here's my word count meter for the novel so far. Mock the meter! Mock the overabundance of words!

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
174,250 / 100,000
(174.2%)

Well of Sorrows

[identity profile] writerknv.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, that's almost enough for TWO novels! Or Lord of the Rings! Or both! :)

[identity profile] jpsorrow.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 12:28 pm (UTC)(link)
It IS 2 novels! But it's a first novel, so there's lots of suck or backstory in there that I personally needed to know, but that doesn't need to go in the final version of the book. I already know of one chapter that will be removed entirely, and there are others that will be trimmed down to 1/10th of their first incarnation.

[identity profile] writerknv.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I find it much, much easier to cut than to add. My first novel was 160,000+ words, and now it's under 130,000 and probably could be trimmed again.